Inside a classroom we usually can gain new knowledge and a excellent grade score of academic result that will improve our resume in order to getting a better pay of job and life in future. So, a guide to it, we need a good lecturer and also a nice study environment. Somehow, there is some characteristic of some class will make me feel hesitate.
First of all, the bad environment will affect me from paying attention during class. As an example, a dim lighting will cause our eyes more tired and sleepy when we are copying the note. Moreover, there is also some bad hygiene inside the class such as rubbish scattered all over the floor that will cause a bad smell inside the classroom causing student not paying attention. Besides that, an awful air ventilation will cause the whole class is warming. This make me feels hot and imagine that my body is sweating like a water pump, this totally make me feel uncomfortable and couldn’t concentrate when lecture.
Nevertheless, irresponsible lecture is the most important factor that causing student having bad result for the subject. Some of the lecturer which teach in very high-speed, unclear voice and simple brief of the important point. Other than that, they also skip some syllabus in order to follow the study plan that set by school, this cause student couldn’t follow the syllabus well. Besides that, some lecturer are not humor when giving their explanation this make student feels boring to hear it.
Lastly, classmate among the class are also a causes that make me feel hesitate. This is because when some student making noise, other student couldn’t pay attention on their classes. Besides that, I also dun like the student using impolite words when talking even talking it with a loudly voice. This causes other student feel uncomfortable to hear it. Furthermore, when student making noise, some lecturer will lose their tempered onto every student and lecturer also not concentrated on lecturing the class after that. This make me feel unfair to other student.
In conclusion, neither student nor lecturer and authorities should take this Authorities should provide better facilities for convenience of student and good study environment. Besides, lecturer should also be more responsible in guiding their student to score excellent result.
Dearest Jocelyn,
ReplyDeleteThanks for changing the setting ^^ hehe
The essay is good with proper structure and examples and the topic sentences and thesis statement are all ok...
Good ^^ Nevertheless since none of us are perfect,there are some minor errors that I would like to bring to your attention:
1. Somehow, there is some characteristic of some class will make me feel hesitate.
~characteristic is a countable noun and since you use some in front, it should be characteristics. Moreover hesitate means you wanna do something but you are quite undecided. Here, a better word would be irritated or annoyed since the essay is about classes you detest ^^
2. ventilation will cause the whole class is warming. ~ it should be poor ventilation will cause the whole class to be warm. (adjective)
3. Nevertheless, irresponsible lecture is the most important factor that causing student having bad result for the subject. ~ lecture means lesson, lecturer is the teacher, important factor that causing should be an important factor that IS causing or just causes...
4. Some of the lecturer which teach in very high-speed~ Some of the lecturers who not which because which can only be used to refer to animals or things ^^
5. Besides that, some lecturer are not humor when giving their explanation this make student feels boring to hear it. ~ should be some lecturerS are not HUMOROUS (adjective, humor-noun) when giving their explanation and this makeS the students feel BORED to hear it... Bored means you FEEL it but BORING means you make people around you sleep...so if I say I am boring means I give boring to people....
6.talking it with a loudly voice. ~ this should be LOUD voice because you need an adjective to describe the noun Voice, LOUDLY is an adverb, ex: he sings LOUDLY...
All de best ya ^^ and continue writing k ^^
Luv,
Ms Jasline